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Evaluating multimodal assignments

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Notes 5/8

  • what is her relationship to sex?
    • has sex with Tommy very thoughtfully
    • doesn’t have other people to give good information
  • why does she look for her own face in porn magazines?
    • looking for an existential sense of self, identity, someone to be like
    • if she’s a clone, is she really exactly the same? is everything from her genetics?
    • if she’s abnormal, is it genetic?
  • why was Hailsham closed?
    • not the only school — there are others
    • Hailsham is special
      • others had worse conditions
    • cruelty to the clones maintains distinction between clones and human
    • Madame calls them “creatures” — maintaining distinction
    • clones make the individual expendable
      • death/mortality is what makes us individuals
      • clones never die — they “complete” — fulfilled their purpose — not a life cut short
  • starts with Kathy remembering Hailsham for donor
    • establishes Hailsham as special, establishes key relationships
    • why does this unnamed donor want Kathy’s memories?
      • he wants better memories than he has — happy way to end his life — wants imaginary life before he dies
      • he got the life that was set out for him
      • wants to live vicariously through her
      • wants to feel love
    • clones don’t have memories of who they’re based on — looking for their “potentials” — trying to figure out memories, identities
  • centrality of memory to the novel — why is the novel organized the way it is?
    • the whole thing is a memory
    • “Never Let Me Go” — reference to a memory
      • special tape that she kept hidden, lost it — joke was that all lost things go to Norfolk — Tommy finds it for her at a thrift store later
      • as a child, danced to it like she was holding a baby; thinks for a while Madame knew she was thinking about a miracle baby; later thinks Madame thought she was pretending to hold a lover; it turns out Madame perceived a girl clinging to an old world
      • symbolism of memory shifts throughout the novel
      • can’t detach yourself from humanity of clones — each repeat gets closer and closer to understanding
      • Kathy imagines a character clinging to a future; Madame imagines a character clinging to the past — dystopian — loss
      • “a little girl” ” creatures” — recognizing and not recognizing humanity
      • who vs/ what
  • what is the significance of rumor?
    • went to see the boat
  • how do they control the clones?
    • it’s normal
    • desire to be normal — don’t want to be deviant
    • group — threat of being excluded/shunned
    • everyone filling their roles — performativity, even down to Kathy and Tommy’s relationship
    • keep them happy so they don’t ask questions
  • role of education?
    • tapping into creativity, imagination
    • gallery
      • to prove that they have souls
      • indicates that souls can be interpreted — abstract thinking — thinking symbolically
      • “they do something like us”
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Notes 5/1

  • repetition of words “donor” and “carer” throughout, but not defined
    • indicates that it’s normal to her
      • normalization = dehuminization
      • ethics of normalization
    • audience = people who consider it normal too
      • creates distance/detachment for “real” readers
  • set in late 1990s, England
    • near past
    • what are the political things happening in England in the 1990s, 2005?
    • could it relate to pro-choice/pro-life debate? — use value of life
    • movie came out the same year as The Island starring Ewan MacGregor and Scarlett Johansson — coincidence
    • Dolly the Sheep 1996-2003
      • demonstrated the feasibility of cloning (even though it was born to a mother)
      • comparison to now — Barbara Streisand’s cloned dog
      • have our attitudes toward cloning changed significantly since 2005? maybe it’s just new — it will be normal someday. next generation might also think robots that look like people are normal
  • clones raise the question of what is a person?
  • we see cloning etc. as the emergent future
    • there’s no markers of the 1990s in the novel (except the Walkman) — feels out of time even though the time period is so specific — which makes it seem like it should be a commentary on current events — but it could also be a parallel present
  • in order for this to be normal, we must either be (a) ignorant, or (b) have defined “human” or “personhood” — people doing what they’re told, following the group, assuming that what we’re doing is right — abandoning morals for utility — next step is there’s no purpose for old people etc.
    • humanity is undefined
  • issues of responsibility — people would be careless with their own bodies if they can be replaced — lack of responsibility for the self
    • but there are organ donors now
  • are the clones human? they have thoughts and feelings, like the Creature in Frankenstein — part of purpose of life is survival, and they don’t have that — why don’t they fight to survive (the clones) the way, for example, Frankenstein does?
    • if you’re making an organ in a lab it’s just an object
    • we would as a group prefer a fresh (grown) organ to a second-hand organ
    • we’re also making lab-grown meat now
      • someday people will look back and wonder how we could eat meat
      • but wouldn’t other “natural” processes be different as well? — if people start living longer, then will humanity exist any longer — we would run out of resources
    • at the moment of donation body parts become objects
    • growing clones for use — certain animals are bred just for research — you can order them with particular ages etc. — sometimes you have to raise them — but often these are fruit flies — de-personification? negotiating line between anthropormoization and dehumanization
  • who would benefit from these donors?
  • why are they sending clones to school if they’re going to be killed?
    • appeasing a guilty conscience?
    • better for the organs?
      • literate kidneys
    • big emphasis on creativity and art
      • artwork represents inner self and what they’re feeling
        • control — we can predict the clone revolution if we know what they think
        • experiment- do they think like “normal” humans?
        • can interpret art, symbolism, judging the moods of the clones?
  • sad that they don’t fight back — but it’s normal, it goes without question
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In-class work 4/26

 

  1. As a group, select a text we have read that interests you.
  2. Do a Google image search and select a cover image.
  3. Analyze the choices the artist makes to represent the novel. What themes are represented? What themes are neglected? What “argument” is the artist making about the novel?
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4/19 in-class writing

What do these words mean?

Why does Snowman collect them?

What is their significance in the context of the novel?

 

Group 1: pp. 84-85 “Tomorrow and tomorrow and tomorrow…” OR “sere” and “incarnadine”

Group 2: “cork-nut”

Group 3: p. 148 “mephitic, metronome, mastitis, metatarsal, maudlin”

Group 4: “bogus” and “awesome”

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4/17 notes

  • More accessible and modern
  • Picks up on the theme of creator and creation that we’ve seen in other texts
    • In other texts, creators were trying to prove a point, but it this text it’s to eradicate a problem
  • What do you notice about the structure of the narrative?
    • Separated into different segments – each one has a theme; jumps around a bit; hard to follow
    • Not chronological
    • Organized according to Snowman’s train of associations; almost stream of consciousness
    • Thinking aloud rather than structuring a narrative
    • Story told in a broken way – makes sense if you’re him, difficult to follow for us – disorienting
    • Setting: there’s nothing else to do but remember
    • Reminiscent of Catch-22: jumps around
    • Trying to show chaos: reflects the chaos of the post-apocalyptic world
  • Old world and new world coexisting – things are repurposed; new meanings in new context
  • What is the significance of Snowman’s name?
    • Snow is a sign of death – everything dies in the winter; but of course we expect spring to come – and snowmen to melt
    • So maybe it’s reflective of humanity’s demise
    • Snowmen could not exist in the post-apocalyptic world because of climate change
    • Abominable is a secret joke – but snow is as imaginary to the Crakers as the abominable snowman
    • Abominable has a negative connotation – reflects his true nature (or feelings about himself) – powerful stance to be able to say it – he’s telling them that he’s bad, but not telling them
  • What’s going on with the “feathers”?
    • He’s different from the Crakers
    • He’s also messing with them; he knows something more – they take everything seriously; the power of knowing
    • Almost like a god or god-send; he has the answers; he creates the answers
    • It’s almost like they’re making up a religion – they make things up to explain the world; the explanations are simplistic; rationalizing why he’s here and so on; but never questioning the source; reconciling the “facts” he gives them with what they know of the world; generating cosmology and trying to keep it consistent
    • Human nature to try to explain the world, to make sense, to make a narrative
  • Could lack of consistency reflect the unreliability of the narrator? We don’t have any evidence that he’s not lying to us as well as the Crakers
    • Fragmentary narrative
  • Are the Crakers human?
    • Maybe not? Something new? Theme of making up a religion – restarting again – parody of creation – new
    • Have characteristics of “human nature”
    • Might be? Next version of humans?
    • does it matter if they’re human?
      • We perceive humanity based off ourselves; they could be intellectual dinosaurs and it wouldn’t change the novel
    • Clearly capable of learning
  • Is Frankenstein’s creature human?
    • No, he’s a monster
    • He had the mental capacity of a human, ability to learn and grow – he had an identity, intangible humanity
    • He’s made of human body parts, so he’s anatomically human
  • Are the pigoons more or less human than Crakers?
  • Were the Crakers looked down upon?
  • Similarity to I Am Legend – last man narrative
  • Chapter headings
    • Seem to be random
    • “Flotsam”
      • she might perceive himself as human flotsam – debris left of humanity’s shipwreck
      • literally debris that the Crakers go through
    • importance of words
      • holding onto words; once the words are gone, the meaning will be gone too – tend to relate to art, music, myth sense of destiny, hope, sex – or he just likes the way they sound
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In-class writing 4/12

Individual work:

  1. Identify a particular scene, setting, character, or event that particularly interests you, and explain why it interests you.
  2. What words or phrases does Robert Louis Stevenson use to describe that scene, setting, character, or event?
  3. Analyze or interpret. What does Stevenson’s word choice tell you about how that scene, setting, character, or event relates to the broader themes or meanings of the novel?

Group work:

  1. Discuss your experiences with the individual assignment.
  2. Choose one student’s assignment as the basis for group exploration.
  3. What themes, motifs, or moods emerged in the individual student’s interpretation or analysis?
  4. How might you convey similar themes, motifs, or moods for a modern audience without using words?
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Website redesign

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Interpreting media

  • thesis? what is the purpose — collect writing, collaborate, central hub
  • website as a whole doesn’t have an argument, but individual pages do
  • title doesn’t accurately represent the website
    • doesn’t establish key terms in a way that helps orient the audience
    • not always clear if it’s morning or afternoon site
  • assumes audience is class
  • is purpose of website to disseminate information? or to produce information?
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3/22 in-class writing

 

 

  • if creature is Adam/the devil, does that make Frankenstein God? If so, he’s a very out-of-control god – inverse of Paradise Lost – but then again Victor isn’t God
  • what happens when humans play god – climate, something that humans can’t control
  • Themes of mental illness?
    • Thinking about creature as an aspect of VF that he doesn’t want to face
    • When he calls the creature daemon, he’s putting the creature in such a negative light – does that make the creator also a daemon?
  • When creature asks for a female companion
    • When VF destroys the female creature, parallels to Eve? Eve as Adam’s downfall – fear of reproduction, new race of creatures – scared that female creature might not like creature, might not abide by creature’s promise
  • Can we have sympathy for creature despite his crimes?
    • Begins life with innocence and curiosity
    • VF as father figure with moral responsibility to creature’s wellbeing
    • Parallel to VF’s experiences with his own father
    • Fear of creature gaining intelligence, becoming more social, learning language, etc.
    • Chain reaction of moral culpability
    • Sympathy vs. compassion vs. pity
  • Frame narrative – why does the story begin and end with Walton?
    • Observations – outsider – similar to travel narratives
    • Affirms the validity of the tale – creates a way for us to suspend our disbelief – he doubts the story so we don’t have to
    • We’re made aware of another manuscript version that we don’t have access to

 

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3/20 writing

Write down one observation that you made about the text (such as a repeated image, a striking scene, a theme, or even a single word that you think deserves further inquiry).

Write down one question that you have about the text.