Individual work:
- Identify a particular scene, setting, character, or event that particularly interests you, and explain why it interests you.
- What words or phrases does Robert Louis Stevenson use to describe that scene, setting, character, or event?
- Analyze or interpret. What does Stevenson’s word choice tell you about how that scene, setting, character, or event relates to the broader themes or meanings of the novel?
Group work:
- Discuss your experiences with the individual assignment.
- Choose one student’s assignment as the basis for group exploration.
- What themes, motifs, or moods emerged in the individual student’s interpretation or analysis?
- How might you convey similar themes, motifs, or moods for a modern audience without using words?
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A character that particularly interests me is Mr.Hyde. He seems to be a dark manifested part of Dr. Jeckyll’s subconscious that has taken control. On the one hand, he can speak and write and come off as a more or less normal person and on the other, he can be extremely violent like a wild animal.
“The large handsome face of Dr. Jekyll grew pale to the very lips, and there came a blackness about his eyes” – Stevenson uses pale to the very lips and blackness about his eyes to describe how Dr. Jeckyll can regress into a very disturbed person when Utterson mentions Mr.Hyde. He is someone that Dr. Jeckyll fears and we really get the sense of how different of a person he is despite sharing the same body.
“Only on one point, were they agreed; and that was the haunting sense of unexpressed deformity with which the fugitive impressed his beholders.” – Stevenson paints us a picture of how Hyde is seen by everyone else. He is mysterious, eerie, and disturbing in sight.
“- but Mr. Hyde had disappeared out of the ken of the police as though he had never existed” – Stevenson uses language to describe how quickly he disappeared as a play on the fact that Hyde actually did never exist.
“Much of his past was unearthed, indeed, and all disreputable: tales came out of the man’s cruelty, at once so callous and violent, of his vile life,” – Stevenson starts giving us some of the information that is starting to come out to the public about how violent this Hyde seems to be. This just adds to the mystery for the reader as to why someone as respectable as Dr. Jeckyll has anything to do with someone like this.
“but of his present whereabouts, not a whisper.” – Stevenson gives mystery to the reader as one might begin to ask how Hyde keeps dodging being captured. Noone ever seems to know his whereabouts until after something has occurred.
The chapter of the “incident at the window” caught my attention because this seems to be an important aspect of how Dr. Jekyll was starting to lose control of his identity.
“The middle one of the three windows was half-way open; and sitting close beside it…Utterson saw Dr. Jekyll”
Dr. Jekyll’s quote to the lawyer: “I am very low, Utterson”
“The smile was struck out of his face”
“An expression of such abject terror and despair”
“They were both pale; and there was an answering horror in their eyes”
Stevenson chose to use three windows in this chapter and Dr. Jekyll near the middle one because it is symbolism that Jekyll is caught in the middle between two personalities, the “right” being evil and animalistic, or the “left”, decent and smart. Stevenson writes that Dr. Jekyll’s “smile was ‘struck’ out of his face”. The word “struck” is used here to show that Dr. Jekyll is being violently transformed into Hyde. He goes from a pleasant smile to “terror and despair”. This obviously would have shocked Utterson and Enfield, which is why they grew pale and were terrified of witnessing the beginning of Jekyll’s horrific transformation before he completely shut them out. These phrases are foreshadowing that Jekyll is losing control, that we do not know what identity he will become, because he doesn’t have a choice at this point. After this chapter, we see that Mr. Hyde is starting to take control of the two personalities more frequently.
An intriguing part of Jekyll and Hyde is the outside appearance of Dr. Jekyll’s laboratory. Stevenson’s first description of the lab is “a sinister block of building thrust forward its gable on the street.” At this point, the reader does not know that this is Dr. Jekyll’s lab but we do know that this house sticks out amongst the rest of the setting on the street. The rest of the storefronts in the surrounding neighborhood are described as looking like “an air of invitation” showing that the neighborhood is not as scary as the building being described. Stevenson goes on to describe the building as having no windows and only having a door in the front and looking like it was neglected. Later in the story, Poole has to break the door of Dr. Jekyll’s lab down with an axe, implying that it was heavily locked. It is also known that Dr. Jekyll’s house is a big and comfortable house that is well cared for. The contrast between Dr. Jekyll’s house and his laboratory represents the difference that exists between Jekyll and Hyde. When Dr. Jekyll is living as himself, he lives in a comfortable, normal house which would be expected of a doctor to live in. However, when Hyde is present he takes to the “sinister” looking lab that has no windows indicating something bad will happen. When first hearing of the windowless building, the reader may assume that the building is hiding something which may have been Stevenson’s purpose. Calling the building a “sinister” structure suggests that whatever the building is hiding is evil. Since the rest of the streets surrounding the block that the lab is located on are described as inviting, we know that this building isn’t similar to the surrounding architecture. This dwelling that Hyde lives in demonstrates how he sticks out and how different Hyde is from the rest of society.
1) One scene that interests me is when Dr. Jekyll starts to tell his narrative about his early life how he was wealthy and basically given all he needed to become a doctor as he grew older. With all that in mind he mentioned that it wasn’t the life he wanted and he needed to be set free from societal standards and that is why he started to experiment, creating two different sides of himself allowing him to separate his good from his evil.
2) He claims that the worst of his faults stemmed from his impatient disposition of gaiety:
disposition-a person’s inherent qualities of mind and character.
gaiety-the state or quality of being lighthearted or cheerful.
He hid his guilties with his morbid sense of shame:
morbid-characterized by or appealing to an abnormal and unhealthy interest in disturbing and unpleasant subjects, especially death and disease
shame-a painful feeling of humiliation or distress caused by the consciousness of wrong or foolish behavior.
Faults-an unattractive or unsatisfactory feature, especially in a piece of work or in a person’s character.
“With every day, and from both sides of my intelligence, the moral and the intellectual, I thus drew steadily nearer to that truth, by whose partial discovery I have been doomed to such a dreadful shipwreck: that man is not truly one, but truly two.” (page, 104)
3) Stevenson wrote that the worst of his faults stemmed from his impatient disposition of gaiety. For Dr. Jekyll to be impatient, especially as a doctor is not a good thing. Impatient means to be easily irritated or annoyed. For the worst of his faults leading to his discoveries to come from the ‘impatient’ disposition of gaiety shows that his personality and character were interrupted by his evil side. His light hearted and cheerful mind and character were easily interrupted. When you become easily irritated and annoyed at something you eventually break down, and maybe that’s when he realized he needed to split these personalities in order to move forward with his life. He noticed two sides to him, he mentions that he was always impatient with his studies and lived a secret life that was held against him as a doctor for that. Society expects doctors to be one step above everyone else especially in today’s world, so I figure that his anxiety and stress eventually took a toll on his being. This discovery led him to find a solution to separate his two personalities and give them each their own identity. One that can allow him to progress in his career and the other that can be set free and do the foolish crazy things he wants to do.
I was interested in Dr. Lanyon while reading this story because he seemed like the opposite of Dr. Jekyll. He was a logical, rational person and was in disbelief when he saw Dr. Jekyll irrationally transform into Mr. Hyde.
Quotes:
Lanyon on Jekyll: “I am quite done with that person; and I beg that you will spare me any allusion to one whom I regard as dead.”
Lanyon on Jekyll: “He began to go wrong, wrong in mind; and though of course I continue to take an interest in him for old sake’s sake, as they say, I see and I have seen devilish little of the man. Such unscientific balderdash”
Jekyll on Lanyon: “I never saw a man so distressed as you were by my will; unless it were that hide-bound pedant, Lanyon, at what he called my scientific heresies”
Jekyll on Lanyon: “O, I know he’s a good fellow … but a hide-bound pedant for all that; an ignorant, blatant pedant. I was never more disappointed in any man than Lanyon.”
Lanyon’s fate: “And yet when Utterson remarked on his ill-looks, it was with an air of great firmness that Lanyon declared himself a doomed man.”
Lanyon and Jekyll were longtime friends who had a big scientific disagreement at some point in the past. I think this disagreement occurred because of Jekyll’s interest in the supernatural and illogical experiments that Lanyon detests. Lanyon believes strongly in science and logic, so he considered Jekyll’s outlandish ideas “heresies.” He describes Jekyll’s ideas as “unscientific balderdash,” which means his ideas are nonsense. Their relationship is broken beyond repair, with both expressing disappointment in the other. Jekyll describes Lanyon as a ignorant “pedant” that obsesses over small details, while Lanyon considers Jekyll to be dead to him. This ties into the idea of the text that supernaturalism triumphed over logic. Lanyon’s firm belief in logic causes his death when he witnesses Jekyll’s transformation. He either is unable to or doesn’t want to believe what he’s seeing, which defies logic. Lanyon knew he was going to die and accepts it, sticking to his beliefs until the end.
1.)A particular scene in Jekyll and Hyde which I found particularly intersting was in the scenario of Jeykll’s butler Poole visits Utterson one night to explain the unusual situation back at the masters place.
2.)
Words & Phrases
Deserted (Streets)
Premonition = Anticipating a certain event to happen
Desperate ( Jekyll depserate for chemicals to use in his laboratory)
Deceived ( That is not the voice of Dr.Hyde)
Sulkily ( The servant voices his opinion sulkily) (Gloomy disposition)
3.) Stevenson portrays this particular scene in the point of view of Poole and the gathering of all servants. He uses words such as “premonition” and “desperate” to create the ambiance of the setting. Anticipating certain downfall is one of many motifs of Stevenson, the situation is exaggerated by Poole saying “If it was my master, why did he cry out like a rat, and run away from me. He exclaims “God grant that he be not deceived.” The overall theme of “The Last Night” is to highlight the calamity of Hyde’s household and the confusion he has brought with him.
The setting of the introduction in the Strange Case of Dr Jekyll and Hyde by Robert Stevenson, introduces the characters of Mr. Enfield, Mr. Utterson, and Mr. Hyde.
As stated by Mr. Utterson describing Mr. Hyde: “He is not easy to describe. There is something wrong with his appearance; something displeasing, something downright detestable. I never saw a man I so disliked, and yet I scarce know why. He must be deformed somewhere; he gives a strong feeling of deformity, although I couldn’t specify the point. He’s an extraordinary looking man, and yet I really can name nothing out of the way. No, sir; I can make no hand of it; I can’t describe him. And it’s not want of memory; for I declare I can see him this moment.”
This description describes Mr. Hyde for the first time to the readers of the text, but also sets a tone for the character of Mr. Hyde throughout the text, specifically on the comment of his “deformity” that is not only foreshadows the suspension of his appearance which is quoted as being “wrong” and “displeasing”, these word choices describing the thoughts upon vision of Mr. Hyde by Mr. Utterson. Stevenson’s contradictory word choice in having Mr. Utterson describe Mr. Hyde as both deformed and “extraordinary looks” gives a split conflict that later is seen in the relationship of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde.
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The first known wrongdoing Hyde stood out to me, where he tramples the little girl. It just seemed out of place and a little ridiculous, since it happened in the middle of the night and had no real motive.
1. Black winter, 3am
2. Odd story
3. Trampled calmly
4. Sneering
5. Natural, naturally
First he used the phrase ‘odd story’ which is what this particular story is and can also describe the whole story itself. There were several things which did not make sense, such as a small child running down a street at 3am in the middle of winter. The way that Hyde ‘trampled calmly’ over her also did not make sense. He did not make any attempt to get away with it, almost like he wanted to get caught (or a confrontation) and seemed to revel in the fact that others wanted to harm him. The word ‘natural’ was used at least three times. Neither this story or the entire novel is natural.
1)The character that I found most interesting is Dr. Jekyll/Mr. Hyde. Their actions show duality and the battle of good and evil. It makes me wonder if good can be separated from evil or if the two are intertwined.
2)What words does he use?
-Dr. Jekyll is described as “every mark of capacity and kindness – you could see by his looks that he cherished for Mr. Utterson.”
-Mr. Hyde is described as “haunting sense of unexpressed deformity with which the fugitive impressed his beholders.”
-Mr. Hyde — “a pale, dwarfish man” “of no particular age”
-Dr Jekyll — a “large, well-made man of fifty” with a “large handsome face”.
– “With every day, and from both sides of my intelligence, the moral and the intellectual, I thus drew steadily nearer to that truth, by whose partial discovery I have been doomed to such a dreadful shipwreck: that man is not truly one, but truly two”
3)Interpret/Analyze: What does Stevenson’s words choice tell you about the scene, setting, character or event that relates to the broader themes or meaning of the text.
-Duality is also present in the names that Stevenson gives the characters – Jekyll and Hyde. Mr. Hyde’s name could have been chosen because he represents the hidden part of Jekyll’s personality/nature.
-The first quote shows that Dr. Jekyll was kind and well liked. The phrase ‘cherishes’ shows that he cares about his friends and other people.
-The next one shows that Mr. Hyde’s appearance and personality scares others. His appearance is described as ‘haunting’ and this reveals how terrifying he is.
-The next two quotes show the battle of good and evil and how different Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde look.
-In the last quote, the author is saying that humans have two sides to them. Also, he makes note that the duality is there, but it could be good or evil.
One scene that interested me was when Hyde transforms back into Jekyll after drinking Lanyon’s potion. It was especially interesting in how Stevenson rhetoric brings to life the scene in incredible detail. Stevenson’s vivid description of the scene with “a cry” and how Hyde “reeled, staggered, clutched at the table and held on” with “injected eyes” gives a dramatic touch to the scene and allows for the reader to practically experience the event. Furthermore, Stevenson accentuates through Laynon’s response the severity of the situation upon discovering that Hyde is truly Jekyll: “‘O God!’ I screamed, and ‘O God!’ again and again”.
It is possible that in constructing this scene, Stevenson aimed to underline how severe such a discovery was and how this struggle represents how Jekyll and Hyde are the same character, especially how it led to Laynon’s death. With Laynon’s death, Stevenson may have emphasized how the expression of an individuals true self may be so severe that immortal individuals are unable to experience it in its true form
I like the character of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde, which seemed to be a single character. Later on the differences split them apart making it two different character. One was good and the other one was characterized as evil. Quotes to explain the characters are: “If he be Mr. Hyde” he had thought, “I shall be Mr. Seek. Mr. Utterson wants to find the inner evil character of Mr. Hyde. He wants to see what is really going on between them. “A respected doctor”
Dr. Jekyll is a respected doctor, well known person in the society. “He gives a strong feeling of deformity”. The character is explained as a mistake or misshapen. Another phrase to explain how much Jekyll had to go through to get back into his character “like a man restored from death—there stood Henry Jekyll”. This potion was the only way for him to get back into the character of good instead of staying evil.
These words and phrases are all very helpful to create the scene and explain the characteristics of both Jekyll and Mr. Hyde. This all explains how stuck Jekyll was with this dual characters.
The scene where they smash the door and get in to see the Hyde’s body lying on ground. It was very intense scene because all that craziness throughout the article was coming to an end.
During that scene he said “a much large suit’’ which tells that Hyde is the big suit which tells that he was Jekyll not long before dying. He also said that they “smash the door open” this part was pretty easy to picturize because in modern world we all see so many movies that does these scene. He also said he had “vial” in his hand to show that he died by poisoning himself. He said he heard a voice saying have “mercy” on him. These were some of the words that put life to the scene and made it easier to imagine what was going on. at the end I would like to say is that throughout the article he was described as a animal but I don’t see any animal killing just for joy that he was doing.
Good observation — it’s interesting that Stevenson (and the characters in this novella) describe Mr. Hyde as an animal when humans are the only animals that kill for sport. It’s interesting that Stevenson (and the characters in this novella) insist on excising this part of humanity from a definition of humanity — could this relate to the way that Dr. Jekyll tries to distance himself from the undesirable parts of himself (i.e., Mr. Hyde)?
Group work:
Group Members: Vincent Patti, Erica Simon, and Christopher Soto
Discuss your experiences with the individual assignment.
The overall experience of the individual assignment in our group was great. Everyone in the group encountered slight difficulty in selecting one scene to write about in where our interests lies in discovering multiple choices from the text in a short period of time.
Choose one student’s assignment as the basis for group exploration
One theme explored in the basis student assignment (Vincent) is discovering the supernatural, won over logic and reason. Specifically, in Dr Lanyon’s death over Dr. Jekyll’s supernatural transformation. Another theme explored is the good vs evil and duality in Dr. Lanyon vs Dr. Jekyll in which both are considered opposites as Lanyon is perceived as being more good than Jekyll who is more evil based on his actions and character.
What themes, motifs, or moods emerged in the individual student’s interpretation or analysis?
The mood of Dr. Lanyon’s death is grim, sad, and tense as Dr. Lanyon dies after viewing Dr. Jekyll.
How might you convey similar themes, motifs, or moods for a modern audience without using words?
Through descriptions of body language, feelings and emotions, can describe the mood and themes mentioned about about grim, sadness, and tenseness without using words. Scenarios of conflict and action through character interactions can also be used to describe the themes and moods of the text without using words directly.
Group 4:
1) It was an interesting experience in which we had the opportunity to use our own ideas to adapt the scene
2) One particular scene that was agreed upon was the trampling scene
3) The themes explored were focused around the scenery and description.
4) For our idea, the scene describing the Hyde trampling the girl would be shown as a shadow in which a monstrous “Juggernaut” tramples a little girl. After the trampling has occurred, a little man emerges from the shadow as described by Stevenson.
Sara B., Jules F., Jahed A., Christina C.
1.Discuss experiences—hard to pick out words to analyze good at interpreting phrases for closer readings, idea came to mind easily when picking a scene.
-need to work on analyzing and close readings, I usually summarize instead of analyze. Picking a scene was easy for me as well.
2.Sara B.’s post
3.Themes, moods
-Theme of good vs. evil—Sara wrote about the scene in chapter one “incident at the window”- this scene shows the theme of good vs. evil because it outlines Dr. Jekyll’s life as he started to lose control over his identity. The evil was taking power over the good
-mood of anger—Sara writes what his mood changes from a pleasant smile to terror and despair. His identity was changing violently into Mr. Hyde where the evil held power above the good.
4.To convey similar themes we would draw a picture or use a person who has an angel on one shoulder and the devil on the other showing that both extremes can fight against each other and take over your conscious and ultimately lead to a lack of power within yourself.
The experiences between our group members were simalar and reflective based on the two persona’s of Dr.Hyde and Mr.Hyde, the assignment helped us analyze how the imagery used by Stevenson alludes to a greater story. We choose to further analyze the imagery conveyed by Stevenson through Dr.Jekyll’s house and his lab.
Katrina’s Analysis: The image of Dr.Jekyll’s house being big and comfortable vs. the laboratory which is described as sinister and secretive demonstrates the larger theme presented by the story which is good verse evil. Dr.Jekyll alone could represent good and Hyde represents evil, but we also understand through this imagery that good and evil are not completely seperate and intermingle.
One idea to convey similar themes of the book without using words is a picture of a house where one side is dark and the other is light. The lighter side would convey a respectable person’s house while the darker side would show to gruesome lab on the side of the house shrouded in darkness as a representation of how good could be haunted by a darker side.
Katrina’s Group
A particular scene that interests me is when we first meet Mr. Hyde, trampling a young girl Enfield relates to Utterson as being incredibly ugly but not sure why. This is a particularly interesting because this is a reflection of Hyde’s identity. He is judged as being evil not based on his physique but metaphysical. Throughout the novel, his ugliness is questioned as to why he is perceived as ugly.
As Enfield says, “He is not easy to describe. There is something wrong with his appearance; something displeasing, something downright detestable. I never saw a man I so disliked, and yet I scarce know why. He must be deformed somewhere; he gives a strong feeling of deformity.
Enfield’s lack of strength in his description of Mr. Hyde sets the tone of ambiguity. This is important because it is a reflection of Hyde as not being able to fit into a proper description because he is both Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde. Not only that, these failures of articulation and lack of placement show Hyde as an uncanny figure, and the so called “deformity” is intangible.